Beautiful Hate, Magical World and Mystic Tongue.

I think I must tell you the story of this fabulous creature, because the 'wise' advice me to! lol, then it make me practice dear English language!

So, the Aughisky is a mystic horse. He's usually very impressive and amazing. He's whiteness is a real delight. He lives in the sea, and humans can hope see him the summer evenings, when the sun is going down. He loves gallop on the sand, mane dancing in the wind. But this marvellous spectacle is only for the eyes...Wether you try to capture him, what a pity for you, poor human! He will carry you away, to his aquatic home, and drown you, stupid human. The only beauty of Aughisky is his freedom. So don't try to deprive him of it, and stay where you are, just profit of the sight of this beautiful creature.

I love this legend, so...what d'you think about?